Sunday, July 09, 2006

Old Woman’s Mirror

Mirrors are the death of man—
to stand forever in a glass,
time stands still
and moments fade
until you step away at last.

An old woman with graying hair,
immortal in the mind alone—
spent her days drinking wine
until she woke up as a crone

spent her nights reading books
about lovers come and lovers gone,
her own lovers, non-exist—
always waiting for the one.

So, she puts on pearls and dresses her hair
and though nearing eighty, goes on the town,
she curses the girls
who trim and fit
look in their mirrors and sit around.

“Ce livre, ce livre!” She cries out loud,
“Stop your looking, go out and live
“You’re all beautiful just as you are
“It’s not the glass that will give.”

An old mirror sits in my room
embroidered with the old woman’s hair,
I think of her as I see myself
young, beautiful, and fair

I look away as I see myself,
focusing on what the eye can’t see,
I clasp my hands
and feel my heart
beating, beating—
young and free.

22 comments:

KensWorld said...

Only in New York.................

EATING POETRY said...

Na... it can happen anywhere...
It's about trappings, reflections, not seeing things how they are.

PinkMoon said...

I've missed you and your poetry! This one's really cool and seems to speak of your own recent discoveries:
beating, beating/ young and free

jakeyology said...

it makes one reflect, don't it?

- glaringly true.

how does dinner differ from snack?

Cocaine Jesus said...

mirror mirror on my wall
watching me as my folicles fall
vanity precludes as vanity must
the truth that sits and gathers dust.

you touched upon a mighty truth here EP. splendidly writen.

shikha said...

How we need to know those depths within..how beautifully expressed...:))

Roger Stevens said...

Never were truer were spoken...

Nice poem.

Roger Stevens said...

Never were truer were spoken...

Nice poem. And don't we just feel young inside?

Roger Stevens said...

Whoops - how did that happen?

Prmod Bafna said...

Beautifully crafted as always! That was a truly hearty dinner!!

White Magpie said...

Good to see ye back to yer self. This avatar looks bettah..Ye are only old as the man ye feel ;)

Cliff said...

Reminds me of the people who used to walk around with pictures of death in their pockets, or framed on their walls in their houses. Today's a good day to live. Tomorrow might not be.

A fairytale here for sure. Mirrors and beauty and old crones. A story of beauty for sure.

Marc said...

Wow. Brilliant.

Marco

EATING POETRY said...

Thanks everyone, your comments are touching. I'm glad to be back, and I love your feedback.

jakeyology: Dinner differs from snack because it should leave you more full and it's more thought out... not something to momentarily satisfy you at midnight.

blow said...

mirrors have always interested me as metaphors. they're so verstaile.. and interpretations are so varied!
another brilliant interpretation.. absolutely spectacular.

jakeyology said...

dinner momentarily satisfies me at midnight; though, in the case of this poetic dinner, it's more than momentarily - and more than midnight :)

Poetry by Kai said...

good!

velvetgunther said...

Yes you're right. Damned if it lasts forever..

Lauro said...

Nice to meet you.
My name is Lauro, i´m from brazil.
I´m 27, married, and i have two children, nowsdays i´m studying business and agribusiness administration.
My native language is portuguese it´s similar to spanish, i was living in south korea for few years that´s why i know some korean too, i´m writing to you because at first i like to make friends, and because i wish to learn another languages and improve my English, and if possible work abroad, that´s why if you can help me in this matter i will be very happy, you can help me by the way that you are able to do.
It´s a pleasure to meet you.

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MB said...

Nice to see you back here.

anonym00kie said...

incredible

Kuan Gung said...

Reflections...great images and the relativity of it all...I've always been amused by what people see themselves as and what they truly are...great pen...