Lolling rolling hills of wine
Roll it on the tongue sublime
Acorn shells, forget-me-nots
Tied up in a lovers’ knot
Dried up creeks, autumn leaves
Hades laughs, Persephone grieves
Beauty in a sky of white
Luminescent golden light
Eternity frozen in a pond
Contemplating life beyond
Weeping trees, chirping sparrows
Creeping leaping vines of sorrow
Tomorrow, today, night falls soon
Softly caressing the afternoon
The past; a whisper, a fallen branch
Overgrown moss, taking a chance
To sink below with frogs and fish
A wish of a day… gone in a swish.
Sunday, January 06, 2008
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12 comments:
this is freaking great! i love it how it rhymes, the song like quality of the words, brilliant...!
:)
N
Awesum...
Superb imagery..loved every bit of it...
The flow was great..
Kudos
TTOT
what an absolutley fun read. i love this one
Thank you people!
wow that was beautiful! :)
-Jeevy
Thats some strong poetry, it reminds me Victorian cast iron. (if that makes sense) Guy :^)
Hmm... Victorian cast iron... you care to expand on that thought, Guy?
this is interesting!
Wonderful . . . Can you please tell me how to get to this world . . .
: )
Welcome back, BTW. It's been worth the wait.
Thank you AP... when will you come back?
To get to this world: turn right at the most southern cloud and left over the rainbow... good luck!
I like the way this just rolls off the tongue. It's fun to read, fun to say, and fun to think about . . . .
Typical you.
: )
I loved the 1st stanza in this poem. The rest is great too.
Poetessxx
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